Badass for sure brother!
If I could change anything, at the end of the first verse, I would hold the 'hell' out longer with a higher scream. In my mind, that would give it an assload of evil emphasis. Also, consider dubbing with a high and low vocal section on some parts to give it a more chorused sound and overall brutality.
Overall, brutal viking skull f**king METUL! Id like to hear more from you. Perhaps something more sinister >:D
Experience: gigging musician in for what...5 years. 2 bands, both of which I do vocals in.